Weekend Writing Warriors – Restoration #2

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This portion continues from last week’s snipped.


He had picked up the thief’s trail three days earlier, after being summoned to Elder Gallien’s personal quarters.

“Demeas,” said Gallien, the Elder of Temple Khalmara, “I am glad that you could make it here so quickly.”

“I came as soon as you asked for me. The message seemed urgent.”

“Demeas, our copy of The Pillars has been stolen.”


“This is a shocking and disturbing event.”

“When did this happen?” Demeas asked.


Next week I’ll have the next portion for you.


About John Van Vliet

Author of the soon to be released "The H'Rhophyan Chronicles", a Fantasy Adventure Serial.
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4 Responses to Weekend Writing Warriors – Restoration #2

  1. Uh oh, wonder what they’re going to do about getting it back, what measures they’ll have to take. 😉

  2. Cool. Of course I’m wondering what the book contains and can’t wait for more details. Great snippet!

  3. Thank to all who dropped by and liked or left a comment. Much appreciated.

  4. The dialogue has a nice flow, to it. You’re doing a nice ob of establishing tension in this scene.

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