Weekend Writing Warriors – Restoration #28

Welcome to another snippet.


Over the next little while I will bring you the remainder of the short story,
8 – 10 sentences at a time.

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Demeas finally finds who he’s looking for.


His horse laid her ears flat and her eyes opened wide. She jumped around, but Demeas calmed her by patting her neck.

“It’s all right, girl. Just calm down.”

She seemed to relax a little. He scanned the surrounding area for whatever spooked her.
After several minutes he shouted, “You might as well show yourself.” From his horse’s reaction he knew his quarry was near. “A lame horse won’t get you very far.”

“They had to send you,” replied a voice from the trees.


Join me next week for another snippet.


About John Van Vliet

Author of the soon to be released "The H'Rhophyan Chronicles", a Fantasy Adventure Serial.
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5 Responses to Weekend Writing Warriors – Restoration #28

  1. Pingback: Weekend Writing Warriors – Restoration #29 | John Van Vliet: Fantasy Author

  2. Oh-oh, sounds like “you” is not a welcome visitor.

  3. So the mysterious quarry has been tracked down! Good tension and anticipation in this bit. You really take advantage of every sentence, nothing’s unnecessary. Admirable!

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