Weekend Writing Warriors – Restoration #36

The story is coming to a close and I will continue to
bring it to you 8 – 10 sentences at a time.

This link will take you to the Weekend Writing Warriors
home page where you can check out snippets from other writers.

WeWriWa Grunge


The standoff continues.


“Tell me who he is. If I die, you deliver The Book. If you die … well … he can’t touch you then.”

“Don’t be so sure,” said Faldron.

Demeas saw something strange in Faldron’s eyes. He thought he imagined it at first until Faldron’s facial features began to change. His usual sparkling light blue eyes now looked like two pieces of dull coal. It was as though all life had left them. His face also changed, becoming disfigured and making him almost unrecognizable.


Join me next week for another snippet.


About John Van Vliet

Author of the soon to be released "The H'Rhophyan Chronicles", a Fantasy Adventure Serial.
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5 Responses to Weekend Writing Warriors – Restoration #36

  1. Uh-oh, sounds like something awful just happened, or is happening to him!

  2. Ed Hoornaert says:

    I think Faldron just became more dangerous. BTW, I forgot to add my snippet to the WeWriWa list, but it’s up and eager for readers.

  3. Oh-oh, that doesn’t sound good. Something is definitely up!

  4. Uh oh– this is going to get nasty pretty quick, I think. Great snippet!

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