Weekend Writing Warriors – Restoration #37

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The fight begins


Faldron lunged at Demeas. The impact threw Demeas off balance. He rolled back and took a crouched stance, fending off Faldron’s blows. Demeas turned and Faldron’s momentum carried him past Demeas. He felt pain in his chest and, when he looked down, noticed his blood stained tunic where Faldron’s blade had made contact. Faldron looked without emotion at Demeas with his dead eyes. Faldron noticed the blood. He tilted his head to the side and revealed a sinister grin. Demeas charged at Faldron, blades slashing.


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About John Van Vliet

Author of the soon to be released "The H'Rhophyan Chronicles", a Fantasy Adventure Serial.
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6 Responses to Weekend Writing Warriors – Restoration #37

  1. Ed Hoornaert says:

    This fight is entering its end phase, I’d say.

  2. Doesn’t look like this will be resolved peacefully. Great fight scene!

  3. Kim Magennis says:

    “Dead eyes”
    Such a chilling aspect to such a heated attack. It is definitely a battle to the end.

  4. The end draws near…and will be final in its outcome. Great snippet.

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