Weekend Writing Warriors – Restoration #40

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The duel has ended.


“What happened to you?”

“It would take…take too long to explain and you wouldn’t understand. Please forgive me, Demeas. Please pray for my soul,” he gasped, trying to breath. Demeas prayed as if he would for anyone about to die and wondered what had happened to Faldron. What reason did he have to steal the Sacred Book? Why had his appearance changed as it had? Faldron had returned to his former self and lay dying.


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About John Van Vliet

Author of the soon to be released "The H'Rhophyan Chronicles", a Fantasy Adventure Serial.
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6 Responses to Weekend Writing Warriors – Restoration #40

  1. Aww, you made me feel sad for Faldron, even though he tried very hard to kill Demeas! 😥

  2. Exciting stuff! Wondering if Demeas’ opinion of Faldron has changed. I came into this story late but sure am enjoying it.


  3. Ed Hoornaert says:

    Now that Faldron is dead, I wonder what direction the story will head.

  4. Aw… I am wondering what will happen next. Good snippet.

  5. Kim Magennis says:

    Cool cliffhanger, John!
    Can’t wait for a couple of answers….

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