Weekend Writing Warriors – Restoration #41

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~~~oOo~~~

Faldron lay dying.

~~~oOo~~~

“Thank you, Demeas.”

“For what?”

“Your friendship,” replied Faldron as he coughed, blood spurting from his mouth. “It was something I always relied on,” he smiled.

Tears ran down Demeas’ face, “Why didn’t you give up?”

“I couldn’t,” gasped Faldron.

“Tell me why you …”

Faldron’s face relaxed and his eyes closed. Demeas stared at him a moment and pulled his former pupil close. He wept and prayed.

~~~oOo~~~

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About John Van Vliet

Author of the soon to be released "The H'Rhophyan Chronicles", a Fantasy Adventure Serial.
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8 Responses to Weekend Writing Warriors – Restoration #41

  1. Oh sad! Now we’ll never know what drove Faldron, and neither will Demeas! And the story’s ending, poor Demeas will never get answers. Unless they come out in the next book? 🙂

    Marcia

  2. Oh, how sad! I hope Demeas finds what he’s looking for, sooner or later.

  3. Ed Hoornaert says:

    This is good. It gives me just enough sense of closure about Faldron, while still maintaining a sense of mystery.

  4. Whitney says:

    I loved the dialog and descriptions; it helps us “hear” their voices better. A little more context might help those of us who are jumping in at #41, though! 🙂

  5. Very sad. Very, very sad.

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